Thursday 7 January 2016
100 Word Challenge week #1 by Puga Chan
Finally! My cupcakes are done! Hopefully my certain sibling doesn't ruin them with his new dolls,Or as he calls them action figures. Like I said I just finished them, so I stepped away, just for a moment, to go wash my hands. Though when I returned, there were two little men standing on the top of one cupcake, as though it was a movie scene. “I wonder who did that.”
I called my sibling into the room to come retrieve his figures. When he came into the kitchen, took a puzzled look and said
“I didn’t put them there."
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i have no feed back the story is very creative but other than that i have nothing to say
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your story, it has a great plot and a nice ending. Make sure there is a new line when someone is speaking.
ReplyDeleteIt is a very creative story pugachun. You have a very good plot. You can add some stronger words.
ReplyDeleteIt is a interesting story, but before publishing you could`ve checked your spelling if eveything was right. Because except, them, you wrote, then. But it`s a really good story, but maybe you should`ve put more powerful words into your story, cause the only powerful word I heard was, puzzled.
ReplyDeleteOh wait! never mind I re read it and actually you did wright, them.well.....GODD JOB!
ReplyDeleteThank you for taking the time to do this week's 100 Word Challenge. I enjoyed reading your story. You've used the Photo Prompt well. I wonder who put those action figures on the cupcakes? Keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteMrs Boyce,
Ireland